Rose Goossen, August 2015

20524135050_1671c61a7b_kTheft, Convention, and Selective Memory: Songwriting in the Age of Repetition

Anyone who has turned on a radio or visited a shopping center in the last twenty years has probably, on at least one occasion, lamented the fate of the song. “How, oh, how,” we cry, “did we ever progress from Bing Crosby to Justin Bieber? How from ‘The Wall’ to the ‘Wrecking Ball’?”

I’ve done it, I admit. When faced with particularly stale examples of the latest chart-topper, I have mourned the state of affairs. This is the golden age of repetition; life is saturated in imagery, slogans, products and content, most of it aimed to stimulate the lower reflex centers and stir up either controversy or a blizzard of dollar bills. Creative people, when presenting new ideas, constantly face the question, “Are you sure that hasn’t been done before?” The quest for originality in such a sea of same-old often seems daunting and fruitless.

While paying my rent in the tower of song, I have done my best to battle conformity with ingenuity. For years, I militantly rejected clichés and conventions, choosing to construct songs that never repeated themselves and bore no resemblance to what was on the radio or the charts. I was always satisfied to know that what I produced was undeniably my own work. However, in recent studies of language and music, I have been surprised to learn that, more often than not, the ear responds best to what has been heard before.

It was Willie Nelson who said that the basic requirements of a good song are three chords and the truth. There is one kind of song known among musicians as a three chord trick, because it uses only the first, fourth and fifth degrees of the scale. This formula has been used, and used effectively, in pop music frequently enough to merit the special nickname. Examples include ‘Wild Thing’ (originally by The Troggs, but covered by everyone) ‘Sweet Home Alabama’ (Lynyrd Skynyrd), and Johnny Cash’s ‘Ring of Fire’. Every one of them is considered a classic, even though their structure is the musical equivalent of a paint-by-numbers. If we expand to our view to include four-chord songs, we can talk about at least fifty percent of everything currently charting on the Billboard Hot 100.

The lyrics of popular songs both past and present are also stuffed with things we’ve heard before. Take the tagline from the best-selling single of all time, Irving Berlin’s ‘White Christmas’:

“May your days be merry and bright,

And may all your Christmases be white.”

I count that as one standard salutation, probably written by millions of well-wishers on real life Christmas cards and since adopted by Hallmark for mass dissemination, plus one repetition mixed with the title of the song to create a simple rhyming couplet.

Or this one, from a recent summer smash hit:

“It’s been a long day without you, my friend,

And I’ll tell you all about it when I see you again.

We’ve come a long way from where we began

And I’ll tell you all about it when I see you again.”

An abundance of clichés! “It’s been a long day” and “we’ve come a long way” are the stuff of text messages and quarterly reviews. They’re the things we say when we’re too zonked to lucidly enunciate our thoughts and feelings. Extra bonus points go to the songwriters (Wiz Khalifa, Charlie Puth, Andrew Cedar and DJ Frank E) for rhyming “again” with “again”. It’s like a hall of mirrors inside this chorus, and yet it spent twelve weeks at Number One.

In his book, ‘Help! For Writers’, Roy Peter Clark reminds us that, “Since everything that is not eternal must begin at some specific time and place, it is logical to assume that clichés were once fresh and original, a quality that led to their being imitated.” With centuries upon centuries of language conventions stacked up in our libraries and our collective memory, it becomes truly difficult to avoid even accidental imitation. New clichés-to-be are being generated and imitated all the time; ever since the popularization of the new phrasal verb “to go viral”, it’s easier than ever for a trend to spread.

Songwriters often make use of clichés because they are memorable and easy to understand. By using a very common language pattern like “It’s been a long day”, an artist can take a shortcut past a listener’s cerebral processes and enter directly into the more sentimental inner chambers of the mind. The phrase has been used so many times before that it has a special express route through consciousness, straight to the memory. Similarly, if a song is composed in a conventional verse-chorus-verse structure, which is itself a kind of musical cliché, the listener will easily retain the pattern and anticipate the changes when it comes time for the big singalong.

An artist casting a eye toward global domination will find that it is necessary to simplify for the sake of the singalong. The singalong is the bread and butter of popular music. We’ve all seen it before: with a mischievous glance that is projected across the arena from at least two large live-feed screens, the performer thrusts his or her microphone out toward the audience, grins and skips around delightedly as the masses scream the lyrics back toward the stage. Now, riddle me this: if a song contains a decorative word from outside everyday English vernacular, such as “synecdoche” or “mellifluous”, do you think they will be singing along in Tokyo? In Milan? In Rio de Janeiro? It’s unlikely. The big machine rarely accommodates artists who take such liberties in their lyrics.

I have been fascinated by the idea of the accessible song for months, and I set a goal for myself to write at least one song that fits the well-worn mold. For my most recent composition, which I performed for the first time at the August edition of Stage Time and Wine, I relied heavily on other songwriters and frankly stole a large amount of content. I used four chords and a standard pop format. I did not cloak the key sentiments in silky vocabulary, but rather spelled them out in standard English. The result? The most appealing song I’ve ever written. It feels like getting away with something nefarious – and I like it.

So, by way of conclusion, I say to all those who would strive to create: take heart, and thieve away. Fret not about the well-placed cliché, for your audience will understand it, even if English is not their first language. It may be true that there is nothing new under the sun, but our recycling technology is better than ever; by turning and turning, we’ll come round right, and sing together for eternity whichever power chorus is stuck on repeat in the heavenly skies.

Bonus feature : Can you find the stolen goods in my lyrics? I robbed Johnny Cash (at least twice), Australian country singer Geoff Mack (who was robbed of a particularly great song by both Lucky Starr and the aforementioned Man In Black), Jane Siberry via k.d. Lang, 19th century poet William Cowper via U2, thriller movie “The Sixth Sense”, Scottish rock group Wet Wet Wet via ‘Love Actually’, local musician Moshe Foster’s ‘Cotton Threads’ and yes, my own mother.

I Fell In 

Love has many faces, they change from day to day.

Love is always moving in mysterious ways.

I see love in kitchens and in carpeted halls.

I learned it from my mama, she says love conquers all.

Chorus:

You can run far, you can run fast

But love is gonna chase you down.

Whether it lasts or whether it fades

Love is gonna make the change.

You can’t be surprised when you wake up and find

That love is all around

So if you want to get out, you’ll have to fall in.

I have seen the world from below and from above.

I’ve been everywhere, man. I’ve been everywhere but love.

Some girls like to ramble, some girls just have to roam.

This girl’s been around, love, now will you take her home?

Repeat Chorus

I fell in and love surrounded me.

I fell in so deep I couldn’t breathe.

I fell in and while my face turned blue

My heart was red, and beating for you.

I know love’s not a question of how much or how long

For if love could be answered we wouldn’t need so many songs.

Somewhere beyond our anger, sometime after our grief.

Somewhere in between the lines, that’s where love will be.

I fell into that burning ring.

I fell in and love was everything.

I fell in and my plans fell through.

When I lost my way, I found you.

So you can run far and you can run fast

by Rose Goossen, 2015

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Reflections on Aside 8

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Impressions from Aside 8 – Sound

For me, it was all about sound. The hum of conversation between old and new friends amongst the mutterings of setting up and technical concerns. The pluck of a moon lute. The clearing of a throat before plunging into the poetic landscape of someone’s mind. The laughter and music of a tea party that is by turns joyful and mad. Strums of a guitar and the thrum of electronica, painting a soundscape of story and voice. With all of those sounds, I felt us all come together at Aside 8.

Music is a unifying force, and we all resonated with our feelings and experiences that certain music brings. One of Tina Ma’s songs reminded me of my young son, a lullaby-like melody that brought tears to my eyes. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath, almost meditative, during Sophie’s song in Sanskrit and Chinese. There was the sense of camaraderie that I built with my companions in R4, and there were the stories of a journey through the body, the mind, and the soul from our wonderful musicians.

At a time in my life, where I just wanted to touch and come together, where I needed something more than ever to feed my soul, the night at Aside 8 was a godsend. It was a place where sound became touch, became nourishing food for the soul. It gave me a moment where I wasn’t alone.

Whiney Zahar
whitney.zahar@gmail.com

 

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There was a hum as bodies began entering the room. Slowly the odd voice or two on the carpets became an eager patience standing in all corners, each one awaiting the questions from new faces before them and cheekily answering to familiar eyes. I saw the cheeks of the room become rosy again, and it was not just the wine warming us that evening.

Performers took us into their little nooks of secrets and stories, and swung us into their world with an unparalleled trust. The audience trusted them back. There were tears that night, particularly as Tina Ma recounted her experience with and her blessing from her mentor. It was a story of the tradition of Tradition, really. I learned to embrace the new with a reverence of the old. A lesson that will not allow me to waste the wisdom of our elders.

It’s impressive what the power of the voice, voices, vibrating strings, and a room full of warm bodies can do to a person. I left that evening tired but not spent, I slept very calmly, and I am pretty sure we all did that night, having spent a night around a metaphorical campfire, sharing the warmth that radiated from our souls as we saw each other not in the light of what we try to be, but what we really are.

Andrew Chau
drewdas@gmail.com

For a full list of performers at Aside 8 and their respective bios with contact details, please go to this link.

Listen Up @ the Empire House, New York, Feb 2015

Across the seas to what many consider the hub of creative expression, Listen Up @ the Empire House ran in Brooklyn, New York as an outstanding success.

Thanks to the members of the Empire House and friends, we enjoyed an intimate evening of musical and poetic passion.
With 35 attendees within the confines of our humble home, a 3 .5 hour session filled us with an uncontrollable buzz.

To continue this underground platform for Brooklynites and International folks alike, we hope to attract more support to bring out the talent in many of those who refrain and shy away.

Listen Up @ the Empire House is an edition of the familiar “Stage Time & Wine” event format, creating a listening community.

Dan’s recorded version of the song he played: http://danflorio.bandcamp.com/track/fleeting-embers

-Dan (shredder/dflo)
www.danflorio.com

Paul Villapiano, 21 February 2015

Shorty

There was a cockroach in the kitchen. That’s were they’re usually limited to for the night.With everyone else asleep and being about an hour away from putting myself into standby, I had flicked on the light, closed the door and there was Shorty: a big one and an easy target for the slipper I chucked at it.

There was no motion from it. So I breathed on it, the antennas twitched. Twice more I breathed on it and then tried to flip it over with the same slipper. However, the said slipper was already back on my foot. I flinched at the feeling of tiny legs and antennas scrambling across my right toes and sent Shorty smack back against the wall.

It landed upside down again and flailed its legs in fear.

There was an old wine bottle covering the floor drain next to it, which I picked up and brought over. It slipped off the bottle the first time but clung to the label on its second try.

After I replaced the bottle over the drain, Shorty scrambled for the kitchen door and frantically searched for a crack to squeeze into but was far too big to fit between the millimeter gaps between the door jam and faux wood door.

And then it stopped and looked up at me. I knelt down and saw that one of the antenna was half as long as it used to be a couple of minutes ago.

After a good eye to stare, I told it, “Go. I know you can either smell or taste what’s on the other side, but you can’t run off to the dining room or living room. Go. I don’t need any trouble. Go.” I then stood to shoo it away with a few waves of my hand until it hid in the shadows.

I grabbed my last beer from the fridge, closed up the kitchen door, sat down with a book and read while I was frustrated with myself for getting more worked up than I had wanted to be before dozing off.

A few days later, it appeared in my kitchen one last time. It was on top of the cans in the recycling bucket: standing still and searching about before it darted down into the half crushed cans. I smiled at myself while thinking, “Shorty likes beer more than I do.”

Paul Villapiano

paul.villapiano@gmail.com
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Red Room goes to New York, Feb 2015

Kicking us off for a quick piece to wiggle the tongue, and waggle the rum

Welcome ladies & gentlemen, family and folks..
NewNY goers, Harlem Bound explorers, Tall with Might Brooklynites
Welcome to Listen Up@ the Empire House.

Soulful steps are so inclined, lifted spirits with tang & tongue of wine.
Chipper tunes to the wallowing blues

All gathered to Read, Listen, following an auditory mission, where silence isn’t submission but conviction..
We invite you to dance & shout, whisper or cry!
Play in search for the perfect rhyme with a squeeze of lime.
.
Share a word; make a statement, ride upon lyrics to a cloudy arrangement.
Songs
Stories
Poems and beats,
Feats that lead to jester cackles.
All is fair, except the hassles.

This is our first run of Listen Up @ the Empire House.
With a family bond and close ties this is –
A Red Room supported event.
A non-profit based in Taipei, Taiwan.
Therefore tonight we join as an international community.

So open your ears

Thank you all for showing up to support this groove


Empire house

This little ramble is about the Empire house
An attempt to capture a particular particle, like all moments it fades into mist.
As you enter, there’s a wave of heat to strengthen thawing bones, a loud crank to enter, squeaks by the feet.
What was made before stands today, a structure built to stay.
Doors open to a rush of the senses, swimming upstream.
For the thoughts & mental knots, raise lids and awake, breathe in- then intake.
Scents that spark the flare start with chamomile tea.
Evaporated lemon drops and eucalyptus leaves.
Lean and grip the wall to undo the laces and envelope a joyous indoor breeze.
In the name of taste! Scents that buzz and fill the affair.
Butter-bowl corn still warm, lays flat on the surface of the tongue.
Coconut flakes melted into chocolate spheres, roll to spin spirals of memorable thrills.
Blue notes start by the neck, an activated oil change for the gears to grind.
We remember that soulful steps are so inclined.

Tunes of the Empire.
Together we’re exploring realms across seas, lands unmeasurable fantasies. Happening upon common ground.
You’ve all braved the elements, sharing numbing and bound sentiments.
The Empire Folk will be duly introduced, within this dwelling roams a party of 4.

Leo,
A swirl of energy disciplined into a singular vessel.
Aiding to wounds, restoring the Inner Chi.
Applied acupuncture arranged in an array for active atoms to remain smooth and clean.
He is the positivity that flows through these labyrinth halls.

Chelsea
Challenging chances with a coordinated can- do attitude, charming youthful choirs into the sweetest harmonies.

Jessica
Jazzed with jest, careful to reassess.
There’s no replica, of Empire’s Jessica.

Clay
Carrying cold war kids, claiming to cook cranberry granola thins.
Clink and clank as the gear turns in the tinker of our good ol’ chap.
Clayton Pipkin, there’s no beat worth skipping, with tunes flowing from our Empire’s Catalyst King.

Manav Mehta
manav.mehta.tw@gmail.com
weloveempirehouse@gmail.com

Happy Half-Decade to the Red Room, January 2015

Happy Half-Decade to the Red Room
This five-minute time limit is good,
it makes me press my words into verse.
A masterpiece of literature this is not
and I’m not sure if it’s poetry or prose,
but in the spirit of this event,
here goes.

This piece I rapidly composed
in gratitude to the Room
they call Red,
where much is sung
and much is said.
And with the thanks I have
to the Mehtas:
Roma, Ayesha, Manav;
and a dude called Ping
who gets up here quite often
and says pretty much the same darned thing.
But it never gets old,
because there’s simply not enough listening in this world
to the stories needing,
the stories needing,
to be told.

Creativity community acceptance,
a safe place,
warm forgiving hands
to land on
when you fall
flat on your face.
Nonjudgmental shushing,
Get on stage don’t be selfish share your words.
This is a space,
in all honesty,
that at times
has bestowed upon me,
healing
by allowing
my heart
to be heard.

So with this I wish you,
Red Room and your bathroom*,
A Happy, Belated 5th Birthday to you.

(*I want to hear Holly Harrington sing the Red Room bathroom song again!)

This was written after an unexpected long day of work right after a trip abroad to see family. It was a cool, damp, winter evening under Civic Boulevard; I was wandering around looking for a late meal, and wrote this inside one of the later-closing eateries. It’s a little snapshot of life in Taipei, a place that I may or may not leave.

Under Civic Boulevard
So on top of my jetlag, tonight
I’m overworked and underpaid,
but this night,
I accept the injustice like a filial son
stoically paying his dues to this – country society culture island –
whatever it is here that lives off the overworked, the over-desirous, the insecure and the underesteemed,
and yet still manages to care enough for enough of them.

Lao ban niang, nimen ji dian da yang? What time do you close up, I ask the matron behind the sizzling oil and rising steam, as my glazed eyes instinctively fall upon some winter miniskirts leisurely flickering across the window.

A souped up little muscle car blasts by to remind the busy strip that it’s a weekend night.

In a very simple gratitude, tonight as I wait for my food, I appreciate the gawdy colors of the LED strings draped over a KTV palace not far in the distance.

I eat. Pedestrians thin out.

Soon my sauce-filled but otherwise empty plates brusquely levitate with a plastic clanking and I wonder how long before I’ll be hinted at, strongly, non-verbally and rudely in a polite kind of way, to vacate the premises.

Two days ago I was ten time zones away, and tonight my body isn’t quite supporting my brain.
I have slightly new eyes for these scenes after the well-worn screen of routine has been temporarily lifted from my mind.
But it’s alright, I like this state, I’m riding this cheap, weak drug while it lasts.

The aftertaste of MSG lingers and I realize, damn, I’ve eaten too full. But tonight it’s all OK, after a long unexpected evening of work this simple joint has somehow hit the spot, just right.

The feet of chairs upturned on tables reach my seated eye-level as the night proceeds, so what I want to say tonight is this:
If ever I have to leave your multi-armed embrace Taipei, I’ll miss you but that’s OK, should one day I find that missing you is what is meant to be,
and I promise you here
that I’ll…savour
and enjoy
every pang of that longing,
as I know all too well by now
that that
is precisely
what you would want me
to do.

Jason Hoy

Soaking In, December 2014

My first exposure with Red Room was at the 5th anniversary event. I had been waiting to get involved in theatre, storytelling and performance for the last four years of living in Taiwan, and I’m so psyched to join in! I adore my new community of friends and I can’t wait to be involved more over the years, especially in R4 and Stage Time & Wine.

I took away a lot with me after the 5th Anniversary. I feel like I found my voice again, in a community where I feel I truly belong. I feel like I’m getting back a piece of myself that has been put away on the shelf for a while because of motherhood, work, and marriage. Now it’s time to get reacquainted with the storyteller/actress/writer that I am. I feel like I can get back to my calling of sharing stories and voices with the world.

However the most important treasure I took away with me actually didn’t belong to me. It belonged to my young son Preston. I watched him absorb his surroundings in his own unique way. I watched him choose to enjoy the performances he liked at Stage Time Juice, and choose to ignore what he wished. I watched him make new friends and share his toys. And when he reached out his little hand to take my camera and start taking pictures of his own, I realized more than ever that art and voices belong to everyone, and everyone responds to it in their own way. In his own way, Preston was soaking it in.

By: Whitney Zahar

Daniel Black, June 2014

PIECE #1

The smoke filled room was dimly lit by hanging paper lanterns.

I had a tough time dealing with the smoke only cause it would periodically rise from my own cigarette and hover over my eyes, causing a slight sting but nothing unbearable.

She looked on across from me. Worrying thoughts flitting across her eyes. I could see her preoccupation with a thought. It was written in the way the emerald green of her eyes shone in the candle light .

The waiter appeared with our drinks. He placed them in the center of the table and moved back through the fog to service another couple.

I looked on as I reached for my drink.

The brisk smell of twelve year old Japanese whiskey filled my nostrils as I went about bringing the cup to my lips.

She stared at me for a moment. The tension building as I waited. We had spent the better part of the night talking about life, books we’ve read, places we’ve been and things we wanted to do.

I could feel the ebb and flow of our interaction, and now we were at a very pivotal point. All because of a question.

“ How are you really feeling?

She blushed slightly as the words left my mouth. I could see that she had anticipated my inquiry.

The cherry of her cigarette lit up as she inhaled deep. Biding her time to either make up a lie or to gauge if I was asking honestly.

I was.

“ Daniel, I –

The faint crack of her voice was noticeable. Her eyes became wrapped in a light film. Either because of the smoke or the truth of the statement that was about to leave her lips.

“ I’ve been so lonely since I’ve been here. I think the most alone I’ve ever felt”

She took another drag. The ash building up on the end. She tapped it lightly on the edge of the ashtray. It fell amongst the rest. I could also see that it wasn’t just the weight of the ash that had been lifted.

She breathed out the smoke, it billowed over our heads as I sipped on my whiskey. The red light fixtures adding to the confessional ambiance in our corner of the lounge.

“ Such a beautiful woman, how could you be lonely?

She laughed at the remark. The remaining smoke escaping in her laughter.

“ The men I’ve met want me for my body”

And a body she had.

5’11” with dirty blond hair that down over her tanned skin. A frame that insisted on recognition regardless of what she wore. I would be lying if I didn’t tell you that a portion of my intrigue was to see what her dress was hiding.

But believe it or not my penis doesn’t do all the thinking.

“ I just don’t want to feel this way”

She extinguished her cigarette. The small wisps of smoke rising up.

She looked me square in the eye,

“ I was thinking maybe…

I caught on immediately but I hesistated so as to not ruin the moment.

We go back to my place and finish this conversation over a bottle of wine?

She smiled. So did I .

 

PIECE #2

The lavish marble designed with patterns that weaved in and out of each other. I stood in the hallway. Mesmerized by it. The wall lamps that shone with such a brightness that made sure to light the decadent nature of the place I was standing in.

“ How had I gotten here? ”

The questioned echoed in my head as I tried to keep my vision from swimming.

The champagne glass in my hand was no bordering on half empty. Although I’m a glass half full kind of guy I’m not unrealistic.

I walked down the hallway admiring the décor. The noise of the party in the distance quietly grazed my ear drums.

The gold curtains covered the windows. I touched them to feel the soft texture and to make out the subtle designs.

As I reached the end of the hallway and the bottom of my glass I looked around and saw a figure standing to my left.

I couldn’t make out a face. My vision started taking a dive in the deep end my champagne filled pool.

I grasped onto one of the tables next to me. Barely maintaining my balance. The sound of the champagne flute shattering next to me echoed in the corridor.

The person was saying something, I couldn’t quite make it out. I focused as hard as I could. Finally being able to make out a few words I heard

“ Not yet, You’re not ready for this yet”

I tried to respond but my voice was gone. I looked down at my hands but they were gone. I looked up and I saw that I was in my room. No lavish hallway, no marbled floors. It had been a dream that felt as real as my waking life. Yet I wonder still what it meant and what I wasn’t ready for.

Daniel Black  is a native of New York. Is in Taiwan teaching and working on his short film for release in October. He writes often from the memories of his own life. Hope you enjoy it.

Daniel Black d.black@tothetopproductions.com

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Julian Hsu, May 2014

DREW’s DRAMA

By Julian Hsu (from Stage Time and Juice)

Andrew is a nice guy: he is really passionate in his work and loves to help people in any way he can.

I am really glad that I was his student because he gave me the courage to do anything. For example, after a few weeks of drama lessons, our school’s choir was picking a main actor. If I had not been having drama lessons with him, I would not have had the courage to sign up for it and get a chance to express myself. And after I got the role, because of Andrew, I was able to do any crazy move that my teachers wanted. So my success in the school choir is all because of him.

Well, back to the lessons: Andrew makes the class really interesting, like we do physical exercises (we do lion faces and sour mouse faces J ), rhymes ( with silly moves ), and expressions (flick, float) in order to improve our acting skills.

The best thing about the class is that it is a kind of relaxing. In most classes, you always have to listen to the teacher and sit still in your seat, but in this class, you only have to listen to the teacher and you can move around freely.